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Chapter 41 

I recovered a bit and then immediately took the pills needed to break open the first node. Pills typically worked best in Early E-grade. After those very early stages, it was a lot more difficult to use them successfully without dangerously polluting your body. In a way, the E-grade nodes were like mini-bottlenecks. Looking inwardly, they were spots all throughout my pathways that needed to be awakened.

The pills did the trick, as they had been advertised they would, and soon the opened node granted +7 to all my stats save for Luck. The immediate power boost felt nice, as did the more relaxed feeling that any Cosmic Energy from my kills or crafting would 'fill' that pathway up and allow me to raise my Level. Then it would be time to break open the next one.

Just testing out my Cosmic Energy flow felt incredible. It was like I had been jogging with weights before and one set had just been removed. Once I gained enough Cosmic Energy to Level-up, I would begin working on the next node. The information had said that cultivators used a combination of their Dao and their cultivation manuals to slowly grind it down. Doing so was not always an easy process, but the Early E-grade portion was generally not too taxing.

Every node was harder to open than the last, and most cultivators didn't have the talent necessary to open all 75 of them. That was when they either sought treasures or did what mortals were forced to. A cultivator could forcibly trap Cosmic Energy, keep it circulating, and then focus all of that energy on a node. Not only did it require more Kill Energy than normal, it required utmost focus and concentration. Then, it would be shattered and the energy would slosh around your pathways in an uncontrollable wave. After doing that, a cultivator who was desperate enough to do that, or just a mortal with no other options, would have to recuperate for a significant amount of time. It wasn't just a matter of healing flesh, but the internal pathways that could not be fixed with just medicine pills and skills like [Minor Healing].

It is what Dad has to look forward to.

I was pretty glum about the prospect of E-grade for mortal cultivators. The accumulated wisdom of thousands of generations regarding the difficulty for mortals to ascend through E-grade was likely correct. Difficult did not mean impossible, though.

I experimented a bit with my shiny new Fragment. The Enchantments I could create with it now were absurdly strong. True, I also had a plethora of new attributes and was now E-grade, but the difference was like night and day. Thanks to [Cosmic Reserves], I didn't need to pause for my Low E-grade quality works. It would take weeks to fully equip my Salamanders with all the upgrades I could now make, but I'd tackle it piecemeal.

I found time to get Dad a Forge-infused triple layer shield treasure, each able to handle attacks even above F-grade. It was the most powerful defensive treasure I'd ever made, and afterwards I took the old one and then gave it over to Ilvere and Alea. They could choose which one of them wanted to use it. They looked at it with suspicion at first, and I just shook my head.

"I'd prefer no animosity between Zac and myself, keeping his favored generals alive seems prudent."

In battle, the Fragment of the Forge was interesting when I used it as a Dao Field. I could turn up the heat around me high enough that zombies caught fire. It wasn't a scorching heat powerful enough to make much of a difference in a fight against even Late and Peak F-grades, but it wasn't nothing either. The more interesting element was how it also stabilized reality around me. I had a feeling that temporal and spatial effects might struggle if they were used while my Dao Field was up.

A pity I don't have a lesser version of something like [Void Ball] so I can test how effective the stabilization effect would be against a powerful offensive treasure like that.

My new Quest for my first Class Skill for Arcane Arsenal was something I also wanted to accomplish, but how soon I could do so was still in question.

Detonate (Class): Craft a Peak E-grade item that creates an incredible explosion. (0/1). 

My boundless frustration with the System would continue for the rest of my life. Crafting a Peak E-grade item could be done, but it would require [Careful Path] or have a high failure rate. And I couldn't afford to just sit around for a week and work on it. Besides, as I leveled further into E-grade, the time it took to create a Peak E-grade item would shrink, as would the failure rate when I just did regular crafting. That wasn't the irritating issue, though I did want to get my Class Skill sooner rather than later.

No, the issue was, what the hell did the System mean by 'incredible explosion.' Did it mean area? Potency? Something flashy? What does 'incredible' mean? I was damn sure I didn't want to use resources and precious time to craft a bomb that didn't pass muster!

I set aside my frustration with that for the time being, since there really wasn't a way to fix it right away. Ultimately, my fighting prowess had still been raised dramatically by advancing to E-grade, so that would do for now.

With Abbot Everlasting Peace falling off the Dao Ladder, I now had the number one Dao and number one Leveling spots. The monks of the Everlasting Monastery being gone from Earth did leave us with another horde to deal with, which was fine. The Cosmic Energy gains were not great for me, but they still really helped push my Salamanders higher. The Sino-Indian Alliance was also starting to get some cultivators leveled-up after I made a defensive treasure for Daoist Chosui. He was leading groups of cultivators and just acting as a Dao Guardian if any elite zombies surprised them, otherwise he just let them harvest the Cosmic Energy.

It would take a few days for the horde to reach us. While losses were inevitable, even among the Port Atwood soldiery, our armies were actually in better shape to fight than before. The zombies were now fairly predictable, even the elites, and we had the tools to deal with Miasma more effectively. The only issue I had was that I couldn't assume the enemy was insane enough to try the same tactics that hadn't worked over and over and over again. The other zombie horde was marching toward us. The Undead Empire didn't become a Peak faction by sacrificing armies without any hope of success. Something would have to be different.

Time to prepare a few contingencies. 

***

"So this is the place, huh? You can drink and actually get better at fighting than worse?" Jared asked with a smile.

Ryan grinned. "Sort of. I'd normally charge some Nexus Coins, but this one is on the house."

Zoey slid next to Jared at the makeshift bar. It was rather convenient how the larger Cosmos Sacks could hold furniture.

"What do you mean, ‘sort of’?" she asked.

"I have a variety of brews as part of my Barkeep Class. I figure a lot of people like drinking and dancing, so I made one that mildly improves your Dexterity. Nothing much, just a few points. But then I got to thinking, why not make something a bit more useful for armies on the march?"

Of course… gotta be productive like everyone else. 

Jared understood the feeling of wanting to contribute, but was everything going to endlessly be about self-improvement? Even just going out for drinks?

"So I came up with two drinks. The first just gives you a prolonged boost to Vitality. Only for about 24 hours and, like the Dexterity boost, not a whole lot. But the second, and the one I'm not going to provide unless you really want it, is the one that gives a very large boost and a surge of energy to keep you awake, but it has some downsides when it wears off. Lower stats across the board, and it just kills your motivation. You borrow from Peter to pay Paul, if Peter has you in a chokehold… well, it's worth it, but there is a cost."

"We'll have the regular," Jared said.

Ryan flashed a smile. "Coming right up. And again, we really appreciate your work. So many lives have been saved, not just by Tanya and the rest of you killing so many Undead, but by those purification Arrays."

Ryan went to make the drinks and Zoey looked at Jared. "Where's Haze?"

"He's curled up in a corner watching Dorel work."

Zoey smiled, she really liked the Ishiate couple. Jared thought they were swell, but if he had to listen to Zoey talk about how Ishiate society was sooo much better than Human society pre-Integration again, he would just leave. Fortunately, she didn't. Instead she looked blankly at the wall for a bit before turning to him.

"Jared… what do you think will happen in the future? We are mortals. Right now, the others who are cultivators are doing their cultivation thing. Meditating on the Dao seems to have diminishing returns for us, though. It just feels like we are going to get left behind."

He shrugged. "With your sword and armor, you already fight better than some of the Peak F-grade Demons. We might get left behind, but we'll still be useful. And if we ever don't… well, we'll probably still be fit for something. Maybe help Dorel and Shella and keep them safe, or something. Or… just enjoy the extra years we have. I never expected to make it to 100, let alone, what, three hundred plus years? I don't know, to be honest. That seems like an eternity to me. Maybe that's enough."

She laughed. "Neither of us have upgraded our Race yet."

"But we are getting close, all of us are. Unless we fall in battle, we are going to live longer than we ever dreamed we could. If we were proper cultivators, then we would be spending many of those years cultivating instead of enjoying ourselves. We are mortals, so why not enjoy? The info that Tanya brought back makes the road ahead for E-grade seem awful for us. I think getting to E-grade will be nice and all for the stat boost, but I don't have any desire to explode internal nodes and suffer agonizing pain every time I want more power."

Her brow wrinkled. "Are you serious? You are just going to give up? There's so much good that you, that we, can do. The Multiverse is a terrible place, but we can make it better."

Jared snorted and took a sip of the drinks that had arrived.

Good stuff.

"You can't possibly think we could ever make a real difference in the Multiverse. Sure, we can help keep Earth safe, or at least help Tanya do that, but we are broken, mediocre fish in a tiny puddle. There are things beyond Earth that could vaporize everyone in the Salamander Group with a Thanos snap. Be realistic."

She shook her head violently.

"That's a shit excuse. It's too hard so we should just give up? Where would people be if no one stood up? Think about all the Civil Rights leaders who risked their lives for justice. They stood up against the system, against ingrained prejudices that had lasted for centuries, and made a difference! The Multiverse sucking and being hard to fix doesn't mean our obligation changes. We are privileged enough to be taken under the wing by a Ranker who has invested in us. If you aren't with us for the long haul, you should just leave."

"Hey, fuck you," he snapped back. "I'm just being realistic, and I do my part. I'm risking my life and will continue to do so. But after the Incursions are closed? I plan on taking a much needed vacation! And guess what? I can, and it won't even make much of a difference because we're both stuck being shitty ass mortals who can't properly cultivate!"

Zoey looked like she was about to snap back before she took a breath.

"You know what? You're right, you are doing your part. I shouldn't badger you about what you aren't going to do in the future, if you are doing something now. Just because we are mortals doesn't mean we can't contribute. Not just now, but for a very long time in the future. I'm going to be an E-grade one day. And I'm going to keep pushing and try to become a Hegemon. Maybe I can't save untold trillions, but we can do a lot and still maybe save billions. Imagine, righting justice for billions. The Multiverse is a vast place, and we can do a crazy amount of good."

Jared took the off-ramp. "Yeah, well, maybe. I'm not putting in my resignation notice anytime soon, or even plan to. Like I said, I don't mind keeping our crafters safe and taking it easy. Tanya's big on letting people choose their own path, ya know."

Zoey took a long drink from her own glass. "Yeah, I do. We owe her a lot. Just… don't give up before you've given yourself a chance. We mortals gotta stick together, right?"

They only got the chance for less heated discussion for a few minutes before the alarm rose up. The Undead were coming and it was all hands on deck once more.

Here we go again.

***

Zac's foray into the Underworld had quickly led to his battle with the Union. Not only was the corrupt organization trading with active Incursions, but they were also using and selling slaves. Defeating their leadership in one fell swoop had made him incredibly happy. Along with it came a lot more information about the underworld in general. Like the surface, there was more than one Incursion to deal with. There was even another Demonkin incursion, though these Demons were a lot bigger than the Torrid Demons.

The Union had not been any real challenge. Disguised as 'Mr. Smith', he wore a mask that hid his Undead features. With his Human side already reaching Level 75, he needed to grind more Levels with his Undead side. He was very grateful that he kept the attributes when he gained a Level from both sides. The only thing he lacked when he switched was the Class Skills from his other half.

It would be best to deal with these Abyssal Demons first, so Ogras and his people can walk around freely without worrying about reprisals against their people back home. 

He was interrupted by his musings when he was informed that ambassadors from the Underworld Council were there to see him. Within the underworld there were a few different factions, with the Union just being one of them. From what Zac had gleaned, they seemed to be more intent on fighting the Incursions instead of selling slaves to them, so hopefully they might be useful allies.

Sap Trang and Joanna joined him as he greeted them as they approached. His Valkyries surrounded the group of seven. The three in the front were clearly the ones who came to speak, with the four others having the look of guards. The guards themselves seemed to have weaker auras than the three speakers, but they didn't look completely useless.

Wait a second… 

One of the guards looked like an even taller combination of Thea Marshall and Tanya Degurechaff. The shape of her face, the height, the blue eye color, and blond hair stood out starkly. Zac almost missed what was being said by the lead individual, a bear-like Human.

"Err, yes, well, I think Joanna has prepared a room for us to discuss things away from prying eyes. I'm Mr. Smith, agent of Lord Atwood."

The four guards remained outside and the three who identified themselves as part of the ruling body of the Underworld Council went in. Zac gave one last look at the young blond Human before stepping through and sitting down.

He studied the three. The man who had spoken had a large sword on his back while the other Human was an old lady with graying hair. Two snowballs slowly rotated around her, and he suspected she was some sort of ice mage. The Moleman had two larger daggers fastened to her waist, and based on the aura of the weapons they were actually a single Spirit Tool. She moved with an easy grace and he figured she was probably the strongest of the trio, around Thea's strength.

"Welcome," Sap Trang said with a kindly smile. "I am Sap Trang, ambassador of Port Atwood. This is Joanna, leader of the Valkyries, and lastly, Mr. Smith. We apologize for not getting in contact with the Underworld Council sooner; our time down here has been a bit hectic."

"I'd say," the large man said with a wry smile. "I am–"

"Wait," the Moleman interjected, looking at Zac with animosity. "You are no Human. You are not one of the four founding Races. You reek of death, and not like a warrior."

After hesitating a second, Zac removed his mask, exposing his deathly pale skin and pitch-black eyes. The two Human councilors looked almost ready to fight, or to rabbit.

"Your senses are sharp," Zac said, not surprised about the reactions. "I am Undead."

There was some consternation and accusations made, but Sap Trang calmed the waters. He was able to point out that those from the Incursions couldn't even use their teleporters until their allegiance had changed and that the more help they received, the more likely they were to be able to close all the Incursions successfully. That eventually satisfied them, for the most part.

"I am sorry about the questioning," the man said with a smile. "We have been isolated down here, constantly fighting the invaders, for months. I am Gregor, and these two are Oksana and Lararia. We are three of the eleven seats of the Underworld Council."

"What brings the Underworld Council here today?" Joanna asked.

"First, we simply wanted to make your acquaintance, but we also wish to inquire about your future plans," Gregor replied.

"We cannot divulge any specifics, but suffice to say our goal is to close the Incursions of the underworld, which would allow us to focus on the real enemies of Earth," Joanna said.

That led to more questions on who that was, and they shared what they knew of the Dominators and the threat of the Great Redeemer if they didn't defeat all of his disciples. The three were quite shocked, but Gregor seemed quite resolute and eager to help.

"I won't shy away from any battle to protect our home, no matter if it's invaders or Dominators," he said firmly.

They still had some doubts, but by showing them proof that they had closed Incursions, including Joanna's Quest, relations went from suspicious hostility to cautious optimism. The major hope they had was in dealing with the Fire Golems. There were other Incursions, but the Fire Golems were the most vicious because they could traverse through the earth itself, easily outflanking any large armies. Even worse than that was their command of lava. A typical strategy was just to flood Towns with lava instead of directly fighting, but Gregor made clear it that they were also a top tier Incursion far more dangerous than some of the lesser ones.

"Can we ask when Lord Atwood plans on moving against the Fire Golems?" Gregor asked.

"There are some things we need to deal with before we turn our eyes toward the Fire Golem Incursion, but we hope to launch an all-out strike within three weeks at the least." He paused. "I did have a question about one of your guards, however. The tall one, what is her name?"

Oksana sat up straighter, a look of fury etched on her face. "Why do you want to know? We do not trade in flesh like the Union, if that is what you are thinking!"

Zac held up his hands. "No, no, nothing like that. I'm Undead, remember? I don't even have working… uh, never mind," Zac explained unartfully. He could see Joanna was struggling not to let out a laugh. "Look, she just looks very similar to someone on the surface. I wanted to know if there was perhaps a family relation. Lord Atwood is always quite pleased when he can reunite families. Can you bring her in and have her display her name with her System Menu?"

The councilors hesitated, but Zac could tell they wanted help against the Fire Golems very badly. They agreed and the guard stepped through, looking a bit nervous. When she was asked to show her System Menu, she hesitated even further.

"The people who went to the Tutorial said that we shouldn't reveal our System Menu… that it's a bit of a faux pas. I can just give you my name."

Sap Trang shook his head. "I understand your concern, but names can be faked, the System cannot. Normally it would be rude to ask, but you look very similar to one of our friends on the surface."

Zac saw the girl's face light up. When she smiled it looked like the years melted and he wondered if she was around Emily's age.

"Do you know Tanya?" she asked excitedly and then showcased her name: Julia Degurechaff.

Zac nodded. "Of course we do. She's even now in the employ of Lord Atwood and Henry Marshall in dealing with the Undead Incursion. I'm sure she will be very happy to learn that you are safe."

Zac's mind whirled and an idea began to form.

Maybe I've spent too much time with Ogras, but if this works, it will solve a major problem. 

***

Alea was fast-learning that Tanya was more than just a brutally competent fighter on the fields of war. Ilvere had told her that she really did know her stuff.

Maybe all Humans know the capabilities of the guns the Sino-Indian Alliance makes use of? Regardless, I cannot believe regular people can just observe how cultivators fight for a week or two and begin formulating proper strategies. 

Tanya was clearly a generational genius. Being so adept at the Dao made that clear, but occasionally you ran into Dao powerhouses who had the sense of a barghest. She was clearly neither.

"Tanya, I fully intend to explain to Lord Atwood that you were worth every Dao Treasure. Why not consider an extended employment with us? I can't speak for him, but why not join forces?"

The blond girl smiled at her.

"I'd consider it, if he agreed to the proposal I made during the Marshall Alliance summit."

Alea gestured with her hand dismissively.

"The Multiverse doesn't work like that. What if we are invaded? What if traitors seek to enrich themselves? A sole ruler who can act decisively is what every world needs. A System Contract is too limited, and what's worse, is that it won't even protect you if what you fear comes to pass. If Lord Atwood becomes too strong to oppose, then the System Contract can be broken based on that strength."

Tanya shook her head. "Only if the difference in power is great."

"If the difference in power is not great, you still have a check on him by being peers," Alea replied.

"Until he shuts down teleportation, surrounds me with his higher-ranked minions, and wears me down until he comes to finish me off himself? Yeah, no thank you. So long as we are peer powers, the System Contract gives me comfort."

Alea took a different approach.

"You are suspicious, that's actually wise, so I won't badger you too much. But even if he won't sign, why not work for us Enchanting? The flexibility and quality of your goods is exceptional. While any Hegemon could do better, why would they bother crafting items for those in E-grade and lower? It isn't worth their time. I'll be direct, you could be set for resources for life if you just sat in Port Atwood and crafted."

"A very tempting offer. But how can I trust it? I've talked with some of your people… he's basically running a Company Store, if a bit less cutthroat."

"A ‘Company Store’?"

The girl explained the concept and Alea was confused. What could possibly be wrong with that? It seemed the Humans at one point had wisdom and somehow lost it?

Truly a strange offshoot of the species. Humans in the Multiverse aren't normally this odd. 

Janos suddenly appeared. "We have a problem, Ilvere needs you quickly."

"What is it?" Alea asked.

"The Arrays, they aren't working. We can't teleport anywhere."

Alea was horrified at the implications, but Tanya didn't seem fussed.

"Do you know what this means?"

"Not fully, but I anticipated the Undead Empire would do something to shake things up. Dorel isn't an Array Master, but he's been studying what Zac provided and he may have a solution. And if not, we just need to annihilate whatever the Undead throw at us."

The delivery didn't sound like bluster to Alea's ears. It was just a statement that held a calm certainty that seemed unshakable.

When they arrived at the center of their Outpost, Ilvere explained the situation. No one could teleport in or out. The Array was being completely blocked.

"How is that possible?" Alea demanded. "Those siege tools shouldn't be available on a baby planet. We haven't prepared any countermeasures."

Ilvere shrugged his big shoulders. "I have no idea." He turned to Tanya. "What should we do?"

"I'll take to the skies and upgrade some binoculars with [Temporary Enchantment] to give me even more distance-viewing capability. If I were the Undead, I'd strike at our weak spot, so Daoist Chosui and Anaad Phakiwar will be joined by Kim, Toby, Jared, Will, and Vhorra. They'll only interfere as necessary, because I want them to be ambushed and then let my Salamanders deal with it. Vhorra can hide them pretty well with her Seed of Loam underground. They'll get instructions to be nice and flashy."

"What about us?" Alea said.

"Once I get a better lay of the land and what's coming at us, I'll return. You'll have me, so I wouldn't worry." She paused. "Oh, and we'll go ahead and use your poison brews to block off their first thrust. We'll keep the Tinker cannons in the reserve for now."

The Enchanter tossed over a few more of her shield amulets.

"Each of you should have at least one, they'll stop a surprise attack by anything less than a solid E-grade, at least once. They don't play well with other defensive talismans, so if you want to use others first, keep those in a spatial tool or Cosmos Sack."

"What do you think the Undead will throw at us?" Ilvere asked.

"We'll probably get worn down a bit by endless tides of zombies, then when they sense weakness they'll send in their elites to try to kill our commanders. I don't know how well everyone can act, but the better show we put on, the quicker they'll strike. I suspect I may be a target, but since I can fly, they might go for easier prey first, we'll see."

Dorel arrived on the scene and a quick back and forth took place between the two of them.

"Hmm," Tanya said, "so they are using either an incredibly powerful spatial-lockdown treasure, or they are using yet more Arrays. Given the range it probably works at, it will be like finding a needle in a haystack, especially if it's deep in the Dead Zone. I'll see if I can find it, but I don't want to be too far from camp. Get me a list of people from the Sino-Indian Alliance and the Port Atwood army that can withstand the Miasma and avoid detection. Anyone with an infiltration-type Class or a stealth Skill will do. I don't want them to take direct action; I just want intelligence."

After that Alea watched as Tanya rapid-fired orders for more traditional scouts to spread out, for defensive structures to be set up, and other resources to be gathered. The Outpost was intended to be temporary, but now it would act like a strong point. As Alea observed Tanya, she noticed that there was not a shred of delay or hesitation in her commands. They rolled off her tongue almost like a prepared speech.

"I'll return in a few hours with more information and updated orders."

"And if you are ambushed and die? If you know they might be after you…" Alea tried to warn.

The blond Human just smiled. "Relax, I have more than one trick up my sleeve. Do you really think I gave you my best work in terms of defensive treasures?"

Alea blinked, no she hadn't, but the craftsmanship of the defensive treasures really was excellent. The idea of layering defenses on a contingency basis was typically too complex for F-grade treasures. She had figured that Tanya had created them off some template or Information Crystal she received from going to the Tower of Eternity. That there were even more capable treasures…

Tanya ascended rapidly to the skies and Alea shared a glance with Ilvere.

This world is full of monsters.

Comments

D3ad0s

Thank you for the chapter Fail. Alright, let’s see what’s so controversial about it!

Jordon Sherstad

I have a feeling that Zac is going to make a mistake.

laidback life

Zac idea is either going to work or backfire horribly. Like so so badly. I have a feeling that it will involve system contracts which may be a real problem.

Sam Oppy

Misunderstanding time! Zac and Tanya are going to fight… Especially as he’s doing this as an Undead

Novel_Rabbit

Alea is finally realizing ‘Here Be Protagonists’ Also if Tanya’s sister is tricked into swearing for Zac… man is gonna die

Vanguard_D

I guess we getting hostage arc with Julia considering what Zac thought...

Marie Tengonciang

Zac buddy please I'm begging. Do not fuck with Tanya's sister! I know he's not normally a schemer but Tanya rivaling him seems to be making him listen to early-game Ogras even more this time around. Zac don't take political advice from the guy who already literally backstabbed a clan member. Demon general perspective finally putting some respect on Tanya's name is nice to see. I'm so ready for the convenient E-grade tutorial boss that will let Tanya aura farm in front of everyone.

Arkeus

The best part with what Zac is doing is that it's explicitly part of Tanya's plan and why she chose her real name on the ladder. She wants powerful people to pick up her family and doesn't mind a king's ransom. The issue is if Zac tries to get some red line or torture her, and at least I am confident he won't do the latter as he should be well aware given Kenzie this wouldn't help.

Perf

Someone in chat called it that Julia would be taken hostage. Welp, let's see how Mr. Low Int sells this without Tanya blowing up at him. Hopefully this is just a ransom and not an ongoing hostage situation, cause that would trigger Volition something fierce.

SavedMeerKat78

Is Zac about to do something stupid?

drwinter169

Oh, surely Zac will do the wise thing and just reunite the sisters, making Tanya be indebted to him, like a civilized being. And Tanya will be grateful and more open to working with him. Surely he won't do something utterly stupid like holding her sister hostage or something similar to blackmail her, no surely not.

John Butler

Just so I can understand real quick. Are the nodes that Tanya is talking about similar to like a skill tree but the tree is your body? And you need to unlock all 75 nodes to advance to the next grade?

Perf

If Zac does demand something unacceptable, Tanya could always counter kidnap Emily or Kenzie and do a proper hostage exchange. Though that'll involve a lot of dead people.

Bat

Zac buddy. You’re making me nervous because plans are not really your thing.

Narani

Let's be honest: Tanya is a fierce advocate for free will, and if whatever Zac is planning to do to her sister involves violating that, that guy is a goner in so many different ways it's not even funny. Enslaving a fellow human, enslaving the sister of a level 75 enchanter, and enslaving the sister of someone beloved and respected not only by her team but by at least 2 factions that's the kind of thing that would spark a human coalition against him and his cultivator buddies.

Bat

Torture seems highly unlikely.

Gaerdir

Great chapter! I’ve said it in more words before so this time: fuck Zac 😂

Lictor Magnus

I just remembered the whole deal with the mystic realm and it being the reason so many earthlings have talents. Does Tanya have some special bloodline or constitution? It would be hilarious if she does have some fairy or pixie in her.

Yers

That fury dao is going to level so high. Also the demon are going to be demon about that. Oh you hold the sister of your rival, time to make her misunderstand the whole thing on purpose to fleece her or worse. Could backfire really bad. He did not even save her but maybe he will try to make it sound like he did. At minimum he lied ( well technically did not on one point) and tried to trick her sister.

jacobk

Genius! Zac out there making sure Earth ends up with the best possible System Lord.

Jason Dixon

is zac......retarded? like if he's somehow NOT acting completely in bad faith here......why lie?

Failninjaninja

Not exactly. To get to D-grade you have to open all your nodes and get to Level 150. From there you have to craft your Cosmic Core / Cultivator's Core and that's a BIG todo.

leopard eye

Oh boy this is going to be fun. Good chapter Fail you can feel the tension rise. Ps if Tanya had a puppet could her three souls simultaneously channel Dao through her leadership skill? Like Fury and volition for offensive manoeuvre. Sanctuary and structure for defence and pledge and investment for the promised victory and their growth in strength?

Louis Webster

What a chapter. Zac leaning into the Demons mindset is gonna cause friction. How severe is what exactly it entails. Tanya on the other hand is giving defensive treasures to his generals to build a relationship. I really hope its not an im gonna use her to force Tanya to back down kind of deal because the entire fic is built on Tanyas need to be free to choose.

Jason Dixon

if ogras or someone else told him to do this i wouldnt actually be worried, because that means someone with a brain put actual thought into the plan. but any idea zac has himself is usually......not good.

Perf

Jared man... you're really making future Tanya regret using those resources on you.

Santakat

Goodness! All of this drama about sisters and plotting makes one wonder what kind of things might motivate a level-headed person like Tanya to really overachieve when deciding what "incredible explosion" means.

Kzmst

Can we really say it's a misunderstanding? It just looks like a hostage situation to me.

Jason Dixon

i just wish i knew what his plan was (or if he even has one to begin with). like do we get to pat him on the back for growing a few braincells or are we stuck facepalming for the millionth time because of his ongoing lack of them?

Kzmst

Forget volition, this will actually push Fury one or two stage further

Eleyvie

Zac has an Ogras-worthy "idea" about Julia. Tanya has a new quest for a spectacular explosion. I can't help but think the two are related. I just can't see the link...

Michael

I'm sure in his mind Zac is is all 'I've found Tanya's sister so she'll be grateful enough to negotiate better!' Of course Tanya immediately reaches Peak Fury and goes 'you DARE hold my sister HOSTAGE!?' And then there's Julia over in the corner with a confused look on her face after signing on with Zac's forces: 'Wait, she DOESN'T work for you? You said you were her employer!'

Jason Dixon

the fact that you cant dismiss the possibility entirely paints a morbidly hilarious picture of just how bad zac's reputation has become. his stonks are in shambles at this point.

Kzmst

I really hope this BLOW UP in his face. Also for some one who chose a stupid nickname so that his sister would be found, Zac really didn't hesitate taking someone else family member hostage.

jacobk

I suspect Jared's desire to retire is fated to end up much like Tanya's.

Perf

It'll be so funny if we have a scene of Ogras congratulating Zac for his masterful plan. 🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️

T-Dawg 2099

Oh jeez, Zac thinks he's being clever. Poor Julia, she's about to get caught up in an unga-bunga's "brilliant idea".

Arkeus

Oh, funny theory: Zac tries to get Julia to sign in with a system contract but she immediately clock something is wrong when he tries to sell her on the company store and company money.

D3ad0s

Zac: “Oh, dear. I might have made a mistake here…”

Atomsk

Zac kinda big mistake, little brain isn't he?

Matlex1

At this point it isn't kidnaping, but it can go there if Zac wants to hold Julia against her will so that he can get something from Tanya, whatever it is. The smart thing will be to have them reunite and then ask Tanya for a favor, something she would be happy to do if it isn't to outlandish. The stupid thing will be to hold her hostage so that he can force Tanya to be his subordinate. It is stupid because she will just actively try to become the planet lord by any means, from subtle to explosive. I am honestly 50/50 on it.

General Black

Enslaving the sister of devil of the Rhine? There is about 60 million soldiers that would foam in the mouth with fearm

Poops

He's pretty fine with torture

Bat

I mean Zach does stuff in canon that from another perspective is ruthless. The mystic realm arc the most recent I have read that have examples of him doing that. It’s more of a what he thinks it will accomplish if he does go down that route which nothing comes to mind on how it would benefit anyone if he hurts her sister.

Poops

I don't blame him. He'll probably spend his funds on level pills but that will only take him so far. I don't blame him

Arkeus

Basically one of Zac's berserk button is anyone potentially harming his sister. He probably can't even consider anyone willing to work with someone who has tortured their sister as a possibility. So he almost certainly won't torture her simply because he will assume that doing so means never being able to negotiate with Tanya.

John Van VanValkenburg

Eh, more likely: Zac: Hey, since your sister already works for me, why not join my all female bodyguard squad? Tanya: You're saying Zac took my sister into his harem?

Poops

Do I think Tanya is stronger than Zac? No. Do I think she can beat him? Absolutely! She's not a warior. Do not play who can be more evil, I promise, you'll never win that game.

Qweunn

Oh my god, Zac stop! Whatever you think is a "good idea" is not going to work, Tanya's opinion of you is bad enough as it is already D;

sapassde .

I'd say it's the opposite, Jared is perhaps the first person to work for Tanya since her second life to actually have the same goal as she does of peaceful retirement. He is looking to become perhaps her most favourite subordinate of the group purely by not being a battle-maniac.

John Van VanValkenburg

Tanya's going to spontaneously develop the Dao Fragment of FAFO when she hears this one.

Perf

If I were Zac, I'd just use Julia as bait to set a trap and kill Tanya, not this roundabout way of making an enemy and leaving her alive. That way, she's out of contention for the Lord entirely. No lose ends. Gotta kill Julia as well to tie things up too. 🫣

John Van VanValkenburg

Probably going to invite Julia to his Valkyries. Who are under a "Contract of Binding". And are described as "quite beautiful women in their twenties with curvaceous bodies as they were basically chosen as courtesans of a harem." So, not *exactly* signing up to be a sex slave, but ... implications.

phantasmagorilla

Even if whatever Zac is planning isn’t stupid, I just know his lack of subtlety and communication skills is going to make it a mess. Best case scenario is he tries tying Julia to him long-term somehow and she’s only a hostage implicitly. Preferably without too much deceit or an actual system contract - not a great start so far on the former.

Darth

@failninja this is ironic haha

Damon Fitzgerald

He has already said he doesn't want Tanya dead until the incursions and Dominators are dead so that is not going to happen unless he just lock Julia up for a few more months or however long it takes.

Redikai Core

I really hope that's not the direction things are going. Zac knows what he would do to someone if they tried that with his sister so the idea that he would use that strategy against someone else is fairly hard to believe. Unless his plan is to outright kill Tanya, which we know he's against doing, he has to know doing something like that would just provoke her. I'm not sure what his plan could really be otherwise but the idea is so stupid I'll be genuinly shocked if that's how things go.

phantasmagorilla

Of all people, Tanya is one of those least likely to hold it against him. I bet she could make use of him even if he doesn’t want to be at the fore as well. If the Salamander group had some kind of permanent base of operations they’d likely have dependents that need guarding, for instance. He could laze around and still be useful that way.

Jason Dixon

you cant exactly trick people with system contracts unless they just......dont read them. and any family member of tanya cannot be that stupid. i can handle a certain level of plot contrivance, but not to that extent, ya know?

Anton Espholm

Julia knows her sister is one of the most powerful people on the planet, who would she sign a contract with a stranger without first talking to her sister?

Spicyice101

Man I like Zac from DotF, I’m really hoping that whatever stupid idea he has, after backfiring horribly, stops him from listening to the demon on his shoulder. He’s much better as an unga bunga character whose intelligence develops into combat skills and planning cultivation progression. Hopefully, after all this Zack and Tanya can make up, and Zach learns an important lesson on how he should probably avoid anything remotely looking like a scheme. He’s just not made for them.

Bjarnepub

Musclehead man: Now I can solve the problem with Tanya by using her sister to make her do my bidding! Tanya: Julia will be free if her enslaver is no longer alive, right? Well, time for scorch Earth! Oh yeah, you weren't kidding with a controversial situation, Fallninja lol. Since Zac = musclemoron made this "clever" plan, it will 100% backfire on him. This is a good move on you, Fallninja, as a writer for making future conflict inevitable and personal for Tanya. For Zac, this is the dumbest thing he has ever done, turning a powerful reluctant ally into a powerful enemy. Even if Zac were to win a war with Tanya, the damage that this will cause will be enormous, and in the worst-case scenario, if it ever were to escalate to a mini-level Horus Heresy scale for Earth, then the human species is completely doomed. It will probably not go to that extreme, of course. He truly is a bad planner and schemer if he does this without thinking about a reserve plan if this doesn't go his way. The man is gambling the lives of his faction by doing this. I mean...Tanya could just wait for Zac to accept his Tower tokens and then, while he is in the Tower, slaughter his entire faction as fuck you. Then ambush him when he returns and possibly kill him. This is just one of the many ways this will go horribly wrong. If I were Thomas and knew about this, I would be rubbing my hands now. The perfect opportunity to turn Tanya completely against Zac and Henry Marshal on a silver platter, no less! Offer to help Tanya save her sister from the treacherous snake Zac. This is just one of the many things that will go horribly wrong with this. Zac will probably be smug the next time he is meeting with her and just expect Tanya to roll over with his "carefully" planned demands and will be shocked when she doesn't roll over for him, and he would say "Why is she being so unreasonable?! I never said I was going to kill or torture Julia, and I was just saying that I could"! Then go to Henry and whine about this, and Henry's face will go completely pale haha. Cultivators' protagonist: the only thing they can do is solve their problems with force and more force. Oh...if Zac planed this with his advisor who has brain cells the this could have possibly worked but not like this. This will motivate Tanya to want to become stronger even more and now seizxing the planatary Lord seat. Zac is going to give Tanya a personal reason to ensure he never becomes the planatary lord regardless of the consequences. This will be very fun cant wait for your next chapter on this mess lol. Zac is no long term planing capacity or plan B if his plans backfire.

Ddutchman

As someone who has no experience with DotF has zac always been a zombie/undead somewhat confused here

Arkeus

Zac for special reasons ends up having two bodies/races he can switch one to the other from, and they each have their own classes and levels (so he has twice the stats from classes/levels).

Failninjaninja

No, he got that way through a combo of different things. He got infected by an Undead mad scientist who used the DNA of a million year old Pure blooded Drahgur. Then because of a lot of other stuff it didn't work out like planned for our Zero Affinity Container and he ended up being able to swap between bodies mostly at will (there's a small delay) and he gets to have two Classes and the attributes benefits of each

Ddutchman

Of course he does because why not lmao

Perf

Oh I know, I just don't believe in half measures with potential enemies. Either return the girl as a gesture of friendship, or use her to eliminate your enemy. Not this half-assed crap.

Perf

This could also totally be a FailNinja bait to stress us out and Zac'll return Tanya's sis without terms and conditions. 🙃 I would bet the demons would try to talk him outta doing that though so I don't think that's likely.

Mana Rope

HAHAAHHA! GREAT. The line about Ogras reminds me of when people really believe they are being clever. Now, I dont expect him to hold her hostage or anything, but if he manages to have Julia sign up with his faction, there will be an obvious information disadvantage that he's not taking in account but Tanya will most certainly do.

Failninjaninja

lmao I don't send that as part of my drafts! It's pretty funny because I did the same thing on one of my other stories

Max

After reading a abundance of highly moral heroes, it was refreshing to read Zac as a protagonist in the DoTF, who is a morally grey character. Zac is going to take Julia hostage, because that's the realistic thing to do. It's the apocalypse, and one has to be ruthless to survive in this new world. Tanya will get a nasty surprise, but she will have to begrudgingly concede lol.

General Black

God I wish Tanya would pull out a magical nuke. İt is not that complicated my overthinking friend. You just need a blast magnificent enough in every metric.

nugitoBambino

he doesn't seem quite stupid enough to check the box for mental disability. but he seems sadly close to that line

Verified Mustelid

It would be standard cultivator logic. All others must be crushed or bend the knee. And Zac can justify it to himself by thinking he's not going to do anything *bad* to Julia. He's just making sure that Tanya isn't in a position to act against him, just like Alea suggested back in chapter 37. At which point, he finds out he's engaged the Devil in a battle of wits when a contract is on the line.

nugitoBambino

"It's not a war crime the first time" - Tanya's personal motto

Enkelados

That would be pretty out of character for Zac. I'm guessing he will offer very generous employment or apprenticeships offers.

nugitoBambino

being morally grey usually implies that they've considered their morals and made a decision. zac-y-boy here just seems mostly dumb

HornsOfTheseus

It's not the realistic thing to do, it's the really dumb thing to do. He might get some short term gain but in turn he made an enemy for life. If there is someone who is very strong but not hostile to you and you want to be smart, you either need to be reasonably civil or if you are ruthless, remove them as a threat. In the words of Machiavelli, "Never do an enemy a small injury."

Green0Photon

If he does that, you know Tanya for sure is gonna force herself to be the Governor of Earth

Sgt. Tibs

He said "maybe i've spent too much time with Ogras" and then he came up with an idea....this does not inspire confidence. Zac seems like the kind of guy who likes getting one over his competition. Him taking the majority of his advice from demons who've built their whole society on that principle is concerning. Tanya, in her business like way, would rather both sides profit. I'm hoping this idea is Zac offering one of his inheritances to Julia to keep a leash on Tanya and not straight up extorting her to get her sister back.

Redikai Core

Every comment about this blowing up in Zac's face or people wanting to Tanya to blow Zac up is very ironic. The one thing you can always trust Zac to do is survive an explosion. Multiple arcs have ended like that, with increasingly large explosions each time. Although I suppose her exploding him would simply be starting the tradition early.

Green0Photon

Assuming it's classic Xianxia, you have blood vessels except it's magic vessels that go through your body that store and move "cosmic energy". As a mortal (or in this case F tier race), these are filled with "impurities" that need to be cleaned. Cleaning them all would be the process of bringing yourself up to the next grade, with some catalyst that you need to do to actually break through, instead of just being the peak of that stage. The classic Xianxia thing is to make it so that everybody has problems cleaning everything and have to move forward with a suboptimal foundation, which is bad down the line, but the protagonist has some way around that and can do it perfectly. Though it's interesting how Tanya doesn't quite care to do that in this fic.

nugitoBambino

Tanya: I'd prefer cordial relations between Zac's faction and my own. Here take these defensive treasures and even if we disagree on rulership, let's work together to keep Earth free Zac: have you considered kidnapping and blood feuds?

HornsOfTheseus

Tanya doesn't need to physically hurt Zac himself to make his actions backfire horribly. She could for example kill other people from Port Atwood.

Verified Mustelid

Fair point. I edited my previous comment to remove the out of character part for Zac. If he does offer a contract to Julia to make her part of the Port Atwood faction, it'll be voluntary for her to sign it. And Zac does consider hostage-taking to be bad, so it won't go that way either.

Christian Jeffress

Thanks for another really great chapter. Hopefully Zac won’t do anything too monumentally stupid, because he doesn’t seem like a bad guy, just not exactly a smart one. Tanya is doing great, and using her Forge Dao very well. Certainly excited to see more in the future and thanks for the work you put into the chapter.

Redikai Core

That feels like the most likely way things will escalate.

Redikai Core

If we reallly want to go there than Zac just has to kill Tanya's allies. It's not like his build is completely centered around slaughtering multiple powerful enemies or anything...

DrkShdow

man failninja liking basically every comment makes it real hard to judge what might happen

Asmind

Yeah, that was the feel i got from it too.

Critical Hit

Just want to make sure its known Zac at no time ever, at all, even comes close to attempting to sleep with any of the Valkyries. The idea weirds him out.

HornsOfTheseus

Yeah, if he held her sister hostage, there's a good chance it would result in all out war and people on both sides die in war. That's what people mean by backfiring.

SevereMaisJuste

I am quite flabbergasted at how everyone seems to be assuming the worst of Zac. Especially in a Failninja fic. He's not that stupid and his plans usually tend to work out. In this case, I really do not think Zac would be risking antagonizing Tanya by kidnapping her sister. Even forcing her into a System contract is dicey. He could, however, offer to recruit her (with or without System contract) in exchange for one of the inheritances of his island. It is objectively an incredibly generous offer and binds Tanya's sister to his faction even without the contract.

Håvard

I did not even consider that. Well yeah that can be fun.

HornsOfTheseus

No matter his scheme (which I hope is simply the 'use the inheritance as leverage' idea), I assume his goal is to get Tanya to sign a system contract to agree to stop trying to limit his power if he becomes the Planetary Lord (whether permanently or just while they are working towards defeating the Dominators and Incursions). In which case, Tanya would probably agree and then immediately start trying to take the Lordship herself.

Redikai Core

I know that. My comment was purely about the usage of the world explosion in general. It's just very ironic as a DotF reader.

Redikai Core

I'm not. Most of the readers of this fic have never read DotF and either have no inerest in reading it and so their only view of him comes from this fic. He doesn't ocme off great without his side of the story. That barely matters however, most have already made their opinons about Zac and as such will always expect the worst from him. It's one of the sadder parts about reading this fic. I can't really enjoy the conversation around it because I know a decent percentage of that disscusion revolves around how much Zac sucks and Tanya is better and how FailNinja is a better writer than the orignal.

DrkShdow

or they read it because failninja was writing it to learn the source material before zac showed up and realized they hated his character from the start.

Verified Mustelid

Having calmed down a bit now from considering the worst ways this can go, I am now hoping that Julia sees straight through Zac's upcoming chicanery and calls him on it. I would genuinely cheer if that happened. Julia has already proven herself to be aware of what would happen if she revealed her surname to other people, so there's definitely a chance.

DrkShdow

hmm my thought for what Zac is going to do "Tanya I found your sister and she has joined up with port Atwood you should join up as well We offer free Dental and cool items all the salamanders are invited. Isn't that neat." and right when Tanya is about to explode, "But if not I know what having family means to people in the apocalpyse and I can also release her from service no issues." Tanya and Ogras both fall to the ground out of sheer disbelief.

Critical Hit

The impression I've gotten is that people read it to look for reasons to hate Zac.

Ven

"Maybe I've spent too much time with Ogras, but if this works, it will solve a major problem." - Zac Well, that doesn't inspire much confidence lol. Now before we go all fire and brimstone on what Zac MIGHT do, let's take a realistic look at the situation. First off, I don't think Zac is considering kidnapping Julia or holding her hostage. While we know Tanya could give Zac a run for his money in a fight (or at the very least be tough enough not to be worth fighting), Zac sure as Hell doesn't know that. While Zac knows that Tanya's strong, I don't believe he thinks she’s that close to him power-wise or that she could keep up her current pace. Back in chapter 37 when talking about her with Thea, Zac says, "I think she realizes that she only got so far up the Ladder because she used her Tower of Eternity token." While he states in the same chapter that he "wasn't sure he would be able to outpace her enough for it to matter" (when talking being able to break a system agreement that limiting the Planetary Lord's power), it doesn't seem like he's treating her like THAT big of a threat. Instead, it gives the feeling that he believes her to be a step up from Thea and a step below him on the power scale. Now as we've seen throughout this story, Tanya's strength doesn't come from her personal prowess alone but also her crafting abilities and capacity as a military leader. In fact, it's these last two facets of her power that make her a threat. Though as we've seen in these last few chapters, Zac is either misinformed or completely unaware of Tanya's talents in these fields. For crafting, Zac probably considers Tanya to be the best available on New Earth but not so good that he needs to bend over backwards for her. Considering he hasn't seen any of her works since Ogras purchased them back in Chapter 17, neither him or his inner circle know that she's reaching prodigy levels in enchanting. While Alea had good things to say about her layered defensive treasures, she hadn’t really considered how much better Tanya’s personal gear was until it was hinted. As for Tanya's skill leading armies, Chapter 39 paints a pretty good picture of how Zac is just completely unaware on that front: "Tanya seemed a bit unreasonable at Westfort about some things, but at least she's willing to listen to people with experience managing armies. It really is the best of both worlds, the army gets her leadership buff, while Ilvere can still call the tactical shots. " Okay, so if Zac doesn't see Tanya as the threat she is, what could he be planning? Well, considering that this plan of his should solve "a major problem," then there's really only two things that come to mind. 1. Zac sees this as a way for him to gain Tanya's trust. Back in Chapter 37 Zac had this to say about Tanya's plan to limit the power of the future Planetary Lord: "Tanya's concerns made sense. He knew that he wouldn't abuse the power, but why should she trust him? They had only met a few times, and his first impression hadn't been good a one." If he views this lack of trust as a "major problem" then it's entirely possible he's considering using Julia's return as a way to earn a bit of trust and gain a powerful ally. Since I'm not familiar with the cannon story, I'm not sure if Zac is smart enough to see the value of this method (and according to you guys and Spacebattles, he's got the IQ of a spork Additionally, this method would also require Zac to show a bit of empathy and consider how he would react if someone found his sister for him. I'm not sure how empathetic he can be with lines like this, but we'll have to see! "Still, he tried to look at it from Tanya's perspective. How would he feel if some dark horse Ranker became the Planetary Lord? Restricted his movement? Taxed his transactions through the Nexus Node? But… it was very unlikely. Tanya herself was really the only major competition he had." - Zac, Chapter 37 2. Zac leverages Julia's return as a way to solve some other "Major Problem." Let's take a look at Zac's attitude towards Tanya wanting to be paid to fight the Undead Empire. Back in chapter 37, Zac felt that bribing Tanya to take part of the fight felt like "rewarding bad behavior." If Zac is feeling vindictive, then he might try to negotiate Julia's return to Tanya for a price for doing something for him. This could be something time-intensive like upgrading the Arrays in Port Atwood or enchanting new weapons/armor and could be used by Zac as a way to punish Tanya's "bad behavior." If Zac isn’t aware of how tough an opponent an angry Tanya could be, then it’s possible he goes this route only to get a rude awakening if he pushes too far. Now of course, whatever plans he currently has could change drastically once contact is reestablished between Zac and his army. If Tanya shows how much stronger she's become since making E-rank, then that could greatly affect how he handles the situation, good or bad. Though, him remaining unaware until he messes up could also be fun to read. Lastly, there's the possibility that Zac has no bad intentions whatsoever, but fumbles in a way that sets Tanya off. Either way, I'm sure the next couple of chapters will be enjoyable!! Great job as always Fail!

Arkeus

don't forget those of us who read it years ago until they stopped reading because they disliked Zac.

MaliMi

Look, let's first see what Zac actually plans to do before condemning him.

Arkeus

it's worth noting that Tanya explicitly choose to put her real name on the Ladder because someone ransoming her family back to her is a "good scenario" for her, as long as they aren't hurt, and Zac is very unlikely to hurt Julia imo. The big issue is if he tries to be clever and tries for something more than just a king's ransom

Dreamgem

The entirety of DOTF is just "Zac is the messiah!" But for multiverse cultivation, just like the First Defier.

Dreamgem

That's rhe point, plus if I recieved immediate real-time feedback to make the story more fun, then yeah I'm going to use it! It's just another of the reasons Ninja is one of my favorite novella writers. Every day he posts is like another book club meeting!

Dreamgem

It's actually hilarious how much people dislike Zac, especially because most here haven't read DOTF. Even just the first 20 chapters on Webtoons , which are short, reveal that he's not a massive douche. He's just REALLY inexperienced when it comes to politics or leading in general. Which isn't really surprising given how he was just some guy before the Fall. Tanya on the other hand, has roughly 2 lives of experience on him, both of which directly involved herding people to some degree. Add to this the Demons influence, how he is constantly put into a position that he is unqualified for, and yeah.... the guy is going to become a little short/quick to action. But overall Zac isn't a bad guy, if anything he is just a morally gray dude.

Ven

That's true, but that plan was also made before her mom died and Tanya had a massive crash-out. That could affect how she handles the situation.

m

Tanya doesn't do concede. She would make an attempt on Zacs life at the first opportunity win or lose

Zero Wrath

Hmm I feel like Zac might just give her sister one of the inheritances? I don’t think he is a *complete* moron. Especially since he knows exactly how he would react if someone tried something shady with his sister. Or if not inheritance, simply try to recruit her and bring her into his sphere of influence. Prob won’t work too much once they reunite tho.

HornsOfTheseus

It was my most powerful defensive treasure I'd ever made Repetition of sentiment, "my" and "I'd ever made". Should "my most" be "the most"? and afterwards I took in the old one and then gave it over to Ilvere and Alea. Should "in" be deleted here? The monks of the Everlasting Monastery being gone from Earth did leave us with another horde to deal with, which was fine. Did she learn this off screen? They only got the chance for less heated discussion before the alarm rose up. Is that meant to specify something like "a little" or "a few moments" or similar before "less heated discussion"? now had the number one Dao and number one Leveling spot. Should "spot" be "spots"? You borrow Peter to pay Paul, if Peter has you in a chokehold… well, it's worth it, but there is a cost." borrow from Peter ( https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/borrow_from_Peter_to_pay_Paul#English ) The Undead were coming and it was all hands on deck again. Here we go again. Repetition of again A typical strategy was just to flood Towns with lava instead of just directly fighting, Repetition of just Look, she just looks very familiar to someone on the surface. Should "familiar" be something like "similar"? Humans in the Multiverse weren't normally this odd. Since this is a direct thought, should that be "aren't"? we just need to annihilate whatever the Undead throws at us." Should "throws" be "throw"? Or maybe "Undead" could be "Undead Empire " to match the plurality? Oh, and we'll go ahead and use your poison brews you've created to block off their first thrust. Repetition of sentiment "your" and "you've created". "your" could be replaced with "the". Or "you've created" could be delete. I don't know how well people can act, but the better show we put on, the better. should "people" have a modifier like "our" or "your"? but the better show we put on, the better. Repetition of better Given the range it probably works, it will be like finding a needle in a haystack, Should "works" be "works at"?

HornsOfTheseus

Tal-Eladar issues from previous chapters: In Chapter 39, there are three instances of Tal-Eldar. In Chapter 30, there five instances of Tal'Eladar.

Jason Dixon

yeah, but just because you can survive (for example) having your balls exploded by fireballs, regenerated, then exploded again repeatedly doesnt make it any less......unpleasant. theres no geneva convention to protect his bitch ass at this point, war crimes would definitely be on the table.

Failninjaninja

It's almost solely due to protag bias on SB. Zhou is objectively a worse person ethically than Zac by any standard you can really think of, and they like him plenty now. Zac isn't without his flaws, and I can understand why a few find him a bit bland, but the actual antagonistic anger toward him is protagonist bias. I do wish more people would give DOTF a try, its literally free if you have KU and I can't imagine a better compliment to an author than wanting to write in the universe they came up with - there's a reason I'm on Book 17 in like two months!

Failninjaninja

It is primarily a way to bookmark for myself what comment I've read... unless I REALLY disagree with the comment, but don't read too much into that, because sometimes I miss a comment in my scrolling

Failninjaninja

Wow, I can't believe how much I end up missing. Thank yo! And yes, that's off-screen, Alea gets regular updates from Port Atwood as they keep in contact using the teleporter until it goes down.

drwinter169

If we entertain that, and say we look only at what we have seen in this story on Zac, why wouldn't you assume he will do something that will lead to a bad outcome? Zac has been dismissive of lesser's opinions, considered the concepts of ruling with limitations unreasonable, and has been taking advice from some of the worst possible advisors. One, I might add, he actively cites here, as an inspiration for what he is about to do. We are reading a Fanon story. It is not Canon. Tanya's presence, actions and influence has upended things, butterfly wing and all that. Zac is no longer the singular top dog. He has lost the top rank on the Earth ladder more than once to Tanya. So why do people expect things to go exactly as in canon, when its not?

Failninjaninja

To clarify - not liking Zac is fine, I think the extent of the antagonism is driven by protag bias. When I compare things like AO3 comments to SB comments, there's waaaay more Zac hate and focus on his faults, which again, he has some, which is what makes him fairly refreshing compared to some traditional fantasy writing where the hero is a moral paragon

sapassde .

Thinking about her Dao Seeds I wonder if she'll try to make Volition and Fury into a new Fragment as a way to get more controlled anger, I don't know what the name would be exactly but it would be a good way to power the effects of Volition and to control the effects of Fury. Maybe it wouldn't allow her to continue pursuing Volition but perhaps what she thinks of Volition can continue on by teaching Sophia about it.

HornsOfTheseus

The actual spelling according to the wiki is Tal-Eladar, I meant both Tal-Eldar and Tal'Eladar are incorrect. Or was that also a typo?

Failninjaninja

my eyes literally just focused in on the ' and the - instead lmao ok going to chatper 39 to fix that too

drwinter169

On the front of differences between platforms like Ao3 or SB, I think it might be more the platform that the medium. I have seen that in a story posted on Ao3 and SB, and the SB comments were a lot more willing to engage not just with the author but with each other. I guess on Ao3, it feels primarily like commenting under a Yt video, you address the author. On SB, there are a multitude of back-and-forth's going on at any time in any fanfic that has an audience of a sufficient number. And as in any debate people tend to explain their positions more, joke around, concede positions while dying on some other hills. Just as an example, your last chapter of Inevitable Dance has 57 comments on Ao3, which amounted to about 3 pages of comments, with only a small amount actually having replies. The thread on SB has stretched 17-ish pages of people discussing things, going back and forth, and so on. So, yeah I can absolutely see that the crowd on SB seems more critical on Zac, as they tend to engage more, and therefore there are more voices. That's not me decrying Ao3 or SB at all, for the record. Some platforms are just used more for one thing than the other. It is what it is.

jay the great

Great chapter! I know Zac could just offer Jullia a really good deal to join port Atwood like one of the inheritances, probably the Undying Fiend as besides the Celestial Artisan it is the only inheritance not claimed. But, I really want Tanya and Zac to fight. So here's some thoughts about how the fight might go: As much as it saddens me in a straight 1v1 Tanya would probably lose or draw to Zac. Even now with Tanya being in E-grade, having a Dao Fragment, and far greater control over the Dao than Zac, Mr. Stat man himself would put up a strong fight. Even if the fight is a draw Zac as the protagonist he is would stumble into a power up and beat Tanya in round two like he does for most of his opponents. A match up for more in Tanya’s favour is the Salamander Group vs Zac. Going along with the constant theme of Tanya going against normal cultivation norms she wouldn’t fight Zac by herself she would have her team at her back. If a 1v1 was a close fight then Zac stands no chance against the entirety of the Salamander group.

Generic Geneticist

Not a fan of that cliff hanger... Tanya reacted strongly enough when she lost her mother. If Zac takes her sister too, via contract or whatever, then he's cooked...

Daureod Athias

Lol "begrudgingly concede", you really don't know what you're talking about

PizzaMagnus

So it looks like she's had a few days to prepare some new toys before the zombie hoard announced themselves. Also keeping the tinker cannons back is suspicious. I know Julia stole the spotlight, but I see the set-up for ambushes, counter-ambushes, assassinations, and many explosions and I'm looking forward to it!

John Van VanValkenburg

I don't think Tanya knows that. In every interaction between them he's acted like a selfish prick

John Van VanValkenburg

I think this is close, but probably more like, "Well, she signed the Contract for the Valkyrie incursion quest, so she can't leave until that's finished. But don't worry! We'll take good care of her."

John Van VanValkenburg

Keeping the cannons in reserve make sense. In context, they are something strange that's difficult to react to. So they have value as a surprise tool to help us later

Arkeus

A funny thing is that Zhou I think has been unanimously acknowledged as the one confirmed "worse than Zac" character in the Salamanders by the readers. Anyone who thinks Zhou has "gotten better" is imo being a bit hasty, it's just that Zhou is conveniently someone who doesn't 'interpret' his boss' orders, so it's easy to assume he has been making progress when you just look at what he is doing.

Redikai Core

It wouldn't be the worst thing to happen to him. Probably top ten though.

Redikai Core

Heavily disagree. Tanya likely has a better chance on her own because of her flight and space limiting item. If the Salmander Group are with her Tanya will have to engage much closer to keep them alive. Their teamwork will not protect them from Zac the moment he gets close.

that girl

You have to remember that Zac doesn't necessarily have the same level of plot armour the original author gives him.

Redikai Core

Has nothing to do with plot armor. I'm purely going off their fighting ability. That Tanya even has a chance of winning is already getting rid of the plot armor. (I'd actually argue her winning is plot armor but there's no point in having that disscussion.)

Matthew Gates

People are so suspicious of Zac… you see one pov where a character questions the judgement of the reader self insert and everyone is ready to burn them at the stake. People are so insecure. My bet is that he is going to try and introduce Tanya’s sister to his sister so that they become friends. Hopefully building trust between the two family focused powerhouses.

Redikai Core

That's actually a great idea. One that I can easily see Zac thinking of as well. The only reason I don't think it will happen however is that FailNinja is pretty obviously setting up a fight between Zac and Tanya which requires, at minimum, a misunderstanding to spark it. I'm betting on him recruiting Julia to the Valkyries. Although your idea happening would be a lot nicer.

nugitoBambino

I feel like Tanya's more likely to find a way to take the town lordship from zac and get his stuff

Kzmst

Volition-> freedom , freedom+fury= Rebellion?

sapassde .

Rebellion or maybe Liberation, depends on how she wants to frame it I think.

Giriath1

Everyone in the comments interpreting Zac's Ogras-inspired plan for Julia as some kidnapping/contract scheme, and here my immediate suspicion was more along Ogras' insistence Zac shack up and make babies, combined with his apparent preference for blondes... So yeah, my first interpretation was that he thought if he could flirt with Tanya's good-looking sister and get her at minimum interested in him it might help deter conflict between him and Tanya. My guess is that approach would be at least as likely to result in hostilities as any potential hostage situation 😅

drwinter169

Isn't Julia 17-18 years old? Zac is thirty-ish IIRC. I think if he went that route the issues with Zac would run a lot deeper.

Hooli4ss

This shit is absolutely peak.