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Will held a tiny fae flame above his head. It was a minor cantrip he’d recently mastered, especially useful for when he wasn’t sure if he would need light or to scour someone’s flesh from their bones.

“Yep, that’s Jason.” Mason mused, his pearlescent face downturned in a deep scowl as he stared down at the mangled corpse.

Mason’s scowl didn’t cover one iota of Will’s simmering rage.

“You said you made a portal for him, and he never came out the other end?” Will asked.

“Yes.” Mason said.

“Alright, I’ll ask more in a moment. Just give me a minute alone.”

Mason nodded and portalled out.

Whoever had done this had assumed the murder would go unnoticed, because the cavern was buried deep underground without a single path to the outside world.

Without Map, Jason would’ve just vanished without explanation and no one would’ve been the wiser.

Unacceptable. Will thought, crouching down and inhaling through his nose.

Stone. Blood. Jason, faint traces of the people and places Jason hangs out. firesmoke, cider, gambling.

Will mentally filtered all of those scents out, focusing on a single unfamiliar scent.

Who are you?

He turned his attention back to his eyes. The corners of the tiny cave were littered with human bones, seemingly decomposed over thousands of years.

The remains of a magical battle hung in the air. The scattered pieces of Jason’s Abilities mixed with some fragments of unfamiliar miasmatic structures, hanging over the bones like cobwebs.

Will isolated and took pictures of the most unfamiliar fragments, adding them to his legend.

Whatever had done this smelled like a human, had been doing this for a long time, and obviously was a decently powerful wizard. Will only knew five people with teleportation, and he was one of them.

The ability to change the destination of a portal en route…maybe two. Maybe.

Loth and Ghoul.

This guy might be as good at magic as Ghoul. How the Abyss would I deal with that?

Like most things, I suppose. Will thought, his grip tightening on his tomahawk.

Sudden, overwhelming force.

Will isolated his butler’s fear of failing him and created a bridge to Stevie, manifesting beside the ghost and Mason.

“Get me everyone who interacted with Jason in the last hour. I want to know why he asked for the portal in the first place.”

Mason nodded.

In a matter of minutes, Will was sitting in front of four very nervous looking people. A young priestess of Holdna, a large warrior who had shoved Jason, a gate guard outside Mason’s Stronghold, and Sherry.

“Let’s start with the earliest.” Will said, pointing to the priestess of Holdna. “What did he say?”

“He asked if the crowd was under a debuff. He was kind of breathing hard and holding his stomach.” The priestess said. “He wasn’t under a debuff, nobody was. He was just being a panicky little brat.”

Will frowned. “Were you rude to him?”

She paled. “I mean…”

“This is not a judgement of character, I want to know exactly what happened.”

“Yeah, I blew him off, because he was pissing me off…” She frowned. “For some reason.”

“Hypothetically, if someone came up to you asking about debuffs while breathing hard and clutching their stomach, and you found that they didn’t have any debuffs on them, what would you do?”

“Check for poison.” She replied.

“And you didn’t?”

“No, sir.” She said, her voice tiny.

“Next in line.” Will said, pointing to the large Climber. “What happened.”

“The kid umm…tripped onto me and I set him back on his feet and sent him on his way.”

Will’s eyes narrowed. The big guy didn’t have the smell he was looking for, but he was definitely lying.

“If you lie to me again, I’ll break your kneecaps.” Will said.

“He tripped onto me, and I shoved him away.” The Climber said.

He tripped? Will frowned. Anybody with more than 10 kinesthetics would never trip under normal circumstances. Was Jason actually poisoned, or was there something else going on?

And why was everyone being a dick to him? That must be why he asked if there was a debuff on the crowd.

“Did you say anything to him?” Will asked.

“Something along the lines of ‘get the fuck outta here?’ The Climber squeaked. “He got a look on his face, then scurried off.”

“What kind of look?” Will asked.

“Like he’d just realized something. Sir.”

“Next.” Will said, pointing to the gate guard.

“He came running up to the gate in full kit, said he had a really bad feeling. I laughed at him. He said he was an oracle, then he flipped a coin and threatened me. I thought it was a joke?”

Will’s skin went cold.

“He was wearing full kit?”

“Yessir. The big mask with the feathers and such.”

Shit, the wizard stole the Family Gathering Set. More than that, he killed Jason with the Fmaily Gathering set on, and his buffs active. That’s a tall order.

Wait. Jason was using a coin to make decisions? He had his luck buff active. From what I know, the luck buff can make unfortunate things happen to Jason if those unfortunate things turn out better for him in the end.

So he wasn’t poisoned, tripping was a luck side-effect, and Shover here gave him the idea to go outside and tell me about his bad feeling…which got him killed.

How is that luckier?

Will’s head felt like it was heating up as he tried to figure out how death could possibly be the best outcome for Jason. Eventually he just set the thought aside, and put a ‘to be resolved’ pin in it.

“Milord, there’s an issue with the jail cells.” Badur’s voice called, grabbing Will’s attention. “There have been more violent incidents than we can handle, so we’re-“

Will frowned looking at Badur, who was approaching with a clipboard clutched to his chest in typical Badur fashion.

He looked like Badur.

Sounded like him too.

Even the Map tag will had put on him was there.

But there was a tiny waft of a very specific scent that Will was looking for.

Will tuned Badur out and turned his attention to his Map, zooming in on the underground cavern.

In the few minutes that Will had been interrogating the four people who had last seen Jason, another corpse had appeared beside Jason’s. A particularly lanky one.

“Badur, I trust that you can handle it.” Will said, putting an amiable hand on Badur’s shoulder and looking into his eyes.

He gave Badur a smile and a reassuring squeeze…

The squeeze turned into an iron grip as Phantom Hand erupted out of Badur’s chest with his heart in tow.

The surrounding Climbers yelped and leapt backwards at the sudden display of violence.

In a fraction of a second, Badur’s skin lightened as the potent illusion unraveled, revealing a pale-skinned young man with a surprised expression.

“How-“ His voice was a blood-drenched whisper as he looked up at Will. “How did you know?”

Will frowned.

He’s fishing for information? While dying?

TELL HIM NOTHING.

Will leaned in close and dropped his voice.

“Where’s your real body?” Will whispered.

The young man’s eyes widened for a moment before giving Will a bloody smile. “Wouldn’t you like to know?” he said before his eyes glazed over.

“Alright, let’s head to the Key Site.” Will said, kicking the corpse away. “We are leaving, presently.”

Jason and Badur are bad, but if we linger, this bastard is going to pick us off one at a time. Fighting someone like Ghoul on his own turf is a losing game. He even had illusions good enough to fool my eyes. If he can move my map tags, and fool my eyes, I might not even be able to pick up his real body on my map. Staying would be asking for more people to die.

It hurt…really goddamn bad, but Will wasn’t going to keep rolling the dice and losing people.

The surrounding Climbers weren’t listening, they were staring at the stranger’s corpse in the middle of their half-circle, an unfamiliar enemy that their lord had seemingly sniffed out in a matter of seconds.

“MOVE!” Will shouted, causing them to jump in place and dive into a portal created by Mason.

While they were getting themselves ready, Will located the Key Site on his map, picked everyone up and began heading for it.

At the center of the beam of concentrated miasma was a roiling…something. It was a distortion of light that looked something like a cross-section of a seashell, with graceful curves that tucked themselves in tighter and tighter spirals, disappearing into infinity.

What is tha-

It exploded outward.

**2 hours earlier**

Mason passed through the Door, and by extension, so did everyone else, Jason included.

“AAAAHH!” Jason screamed in alarm as a sudden feeling of impending doom wracked his body, causing him to fall to his hands and knees, sweat dripping from his nose onto the dirt of Mason’s inner world.

An instant later, the world went dark and the pressure changed suddenly, causing his ears to pop. The smell went from fresh outdoors, to ancient decay, with next to no oxygen.

Fuck, I’m gonna die. Jason somehow knew without a shadow of a doubt.

A voice emerged from the darkness.

“Tell me everything you know about William Oh.”

Jason blinked, unable to see in the pitch-black darkness.

“You…don’t know who William Oh is?” He replied.

“Don’t ask. Only answer. What do you know about William Oh?” the voice asked, sounding a little tense.

“…I know he’s gonna kick your ass.” Jason said with a chuckle.

**William Oh, the next morning**

“Some of the boys were talking and we thought this would be a perfect spot to drop another waystation.” Sammohan said. “The monsters are basically an afterthought, the mining is good, and we could have a working farm as fast as someone could sneeze.

“And look at that scenery.”  Sammohan finished, gesturing to the beautiful, lush valley.

“Feels like a trap.” Loth said, arms crossed, a scowl on her face. Nobody had been in a very good mood, and it seemed to have happened the moment they arrive.

The ugly feeling had lifted in a matter of seconds, but it left a lingering aftertaste and dozens of Climbers cooling off in their Stronghold’s jail cells.

The moment they had crossed over, Will had felt a lingering rage, as if someone had taken something precious from him, but he forgot who, and what.

It gave him a bad feeling about staying here.

But after that first taste, nothing had come of it, so Will was willing to hear Sammohan out. They would stay for a few days, and if nothing bad happened, they would set up a waystation.

Where would be a good place to put a waystation? Will mused, turning his attention to his Map.

…What’s this?

Will’s legend had a handful of new entries that he didn’t remember adding. They were pictures of fragments of miasmatic structures with distinct patterns that he’d never come across before.

The Abyss? How did this even get in here?

Will’s skin went cold as he recalled the sudden bad feeling he’d gotten last night when they crossed over into the 25th Floor.

Will immediately ran through his Memory Key, running a pre-programmed list of hot and cold memories to shatter any brittle mind control.

Nothing.

If someone else had the kind of invasive access to my class that it would require, why would they only take three sketches of odd miasmatic structures? That’s the sort of thing I would do. Did I get my memory wiped? How would that…maybe…

Will selected the fragmented miasmatic structures out of his legend and highlighted them on his map, turning up the brightness higher and higher, until a tiny portion of the map began to glow.

By adding depth to his search, it turned out there were a few examples of the miasma structures in question inside a lightless cavern a quarter-mile underground.

And that cavern had a familiar-looking body in it.

Will’s eye twitched.

He began copying everything down and drastically altering the settings on his Map.

“Something wrong?” Jason asked from beside him. Will’s old friend from back in the orphanage who had singlehandedly made him a legend was looking up at him with a concerned expression.

“Gonna be a pain in the ass to clear a good spot,” Will lied as he frantically added more information to his Legend.

Jason Dead. Will added a picture and the location of the cave. Taken from inside Mason without drawing alarm. Talented wizard. Shapeshifter taking his place. Already had some pictures of the traces of the culprit. Mind wipe?

“Jason I’ve been meaning to ask you a question.”

“Shoot.”

Phantom hand erupted from Jason’s chest, carrying his heart.

“…How did you know?” ‘Jason’ asked, his features melting to become someone else.

Fishing for information? While dying? I don’t believe it.

‘He might have a spare body or a way to come back to life. Does not seem to be concerned by death.’ Will wrote  in his legend.

“Where’s your real body?” Will asked as Jason’s features shifted.

“What…are you?” the young man asked before going limp.

Attempting to leave via the Key Site, Will wrote before rounding everyone up and preparing to leave.

Comments

Macronomicon

wrote today to Tom Cardy's 'I’m better friends with my barber than you are friends with your barber'

Daedalus

Will’s Legend once again proves to be his most potent resource. Just… in a different way, now.

Jacob

I think it's ironic that the timelooper doomed himself the moment William Oh got caught in the trap due to the Tower trying to force Will through it as fast as possible. Lost the game before he started.

Scrimpt

Wonder why map information is retained but nothing else is.

Ed Je

Oh boy i finally get my time loop fantasy novel from Macronomicon

Chibrahim

Imagine being someone's little bitch in your own timeloop

JoBer

Banger

Jacob Armstrong

The luckiest thing Jason could do is getting himself interrogated and murdered at the start of each time loop. I hope it ends with him talking the monster into surrendering to Will.

Macronomicon

i kind of see it like this: Either the tower or The System is aware of the passage of time, because in order for some of the emotions to travel back into the past, there has to be some tiny gap for information to flow backwards. in short, it's not a perfect time loop, because a perfect time loop wouldn't allow for the antagonist to make changes either.

Macronomicon

If i ever do a timeloop with the protagonist at the center, it's gonna be a xianxia yandere harem called 'courting death'

AG

I’m kind of hoping that Jason ultimately ends up being the one to defeat or at the very least foil Kyle’s plans

Tate Browder

How is jasons acuity not high enough to see in the dark at level 75 with a full kit on

Plot Twist

Phantom pain from getting stabbed is there so it might just be a full heal and memory wipe

Trey

even if he did jason already has a prophecy that will is gonna shove the entire floor up the looper’s ass so i doubt his surrender is gonna mean much

X

Welp you said it now you gotta make it happen

Hudson Hohimer

The time loop has a “memory leak” lol It’s how the bad emotions also leak through

Andrew

Thank you!

Quazzy

Acuity makes you better at seeing. It doesn't make you magically able to see when there aren't any photons 😭

funktorial

okay yeah Map is the best skill

Bunny Waffles

Make it so! I will eagerly follow and support such a series, right up until it's blockbuster film debut!

SirReality

Oh fuck this is good, I love me some asymmetrical and nearly asynchronous warfare. Giving a villain a time loop with even more advantages should be a good challenge.

Tate Browder

It’s shown that high enough acuity gives you a general sense of what’s around you and Jason def has like 150 acuity or smth crazy

ADONUS GREEN

Not worried about side characters dying when there's resurrection

Cyrus McEnnis

I've always been partial to his "Ballad of Smokin' Joe Rudeboy" myself >.>

Kev Gamm

Another plausible reason could be that Will's origin gives him some passive resistance to time shenanigans and this extends to his class. Honestly, being a child-construct of Ouroboros born inside a time loop should count for something here

Patron1kj6tz

1) Trying to defeat a fragment(?) of Ouroborus with time loops is like trying burn a demi-god of fire to death. 2) Either this guy less than 3,000 years old or previous Wills passed this floor without running into him. 3) Map coming in clutch again.

Patron1kj6tz

So I'm guessing outside of 1 or 2 embarrassing noodle incidents all the deaths would be at the hands of past, present, prospective, and/or future harem members?

Patron1kj6tz

My current guess is that Will uses the miasma structure at the key-site to kill Kyle at the start of the 'last' loop (shoving the floor us his ass) so no one ends up (physically) harmed. From his p.o.v. he would just step through the Door and immediately get a raid-boss kill notification (assuming Kyle counts as a raid-boss) or level up from killing a high level enemy. Edit: (added clarification) I think Will will mess with the time-loop core thing or whatever it is on the second to last loop so it kills Kyle on the final timeline of the floor at the moment of their arrival.

Ethan B.

TFTC!! Fantastic use of the legend tab, I can't wait to see this cowardly bitch die.

William Julien

Maybe I have the wrong idea but Will encode information on is map with miasma and miasma only reset when entering a new floor? Like the tower keep informations encoded in miasma

Dax

The only climbers that get this far are essentially the parties of Will and his other incarnations right? So how would this wizard not know who William Oh is?

Stanisław Drewienkowski

Man, this sure is on brand for Will to absolutely obliterate a hostile time loop. A good warmup before doing the same with the Tower as a whole

Stanisław Drewienkowski

It is curious that the loop resets everything body wise, mends wounds, restores to life, but doesn't reset changes to the legend. I assume buffs would be restored to the state when loop began. So, WHERE is the legend stored? If it was inside Wills body/brain than it should be wiped of everything beyond entering the floor. So the only remaining possibility is that it is stored within the Tower, and Will just establishes connections with Systems data bank. Which is very interesting, and makes me wonder, how much data can he store, could it be used to „hack” the system by writing certain string into the legend, like an injection attack? Can Will reverse engineer that part of his class to better understand how the system connects things, in preparation to making his own?

Sylphie

Dude you killed Jason and the other guy for real. Dude!

Sylphie

Also I love this. It is great

HUAAAANG

Xianxia yandere harem? But you already wrote problems with princesses. Where's the ending of that, anyway? I found "it will be finished" and no end :(

vVip3rzzz

So Will is leaving himself a Manuel in his map of what’s going on it it’s Legend. And his plan is probably going to involve weaponising the time loop against its creator

Thomas Issa

I think soon characters will need to start dying

Temeris

To serve what end?

Timur Ibraev

Why haven't Will tried to resurrect Jason? They have priests, who can do that

Temeris

It's too dangerous. Whatever killed Jason did so without being seen. If Will wasted time getting Jason's body to resurrect it the priestesses would be targeted next when his back is turned.

McIntosh Ewell

I mean, that's fairly common in a lot of time loops before the looper levels up. "Edge of Tomorrow", "Mother of Learning", "Happy Death Day" are just a few examples off the top of my head.

Chibrahim

Yeah, but the timelooper Here is so old, his age is impossible to estimate

Pati

Fuck it’s genius!

Not Real

Well he doesn’t know about William oh so that caps his age at 3000. But it’s probably not even 1000 as the other 2 would have probably killed him

Grant Ackerman

Just wanted to leave a note for anybody else reading this. Years of Apocalypse is an INCREDIBLE time loop story, just as good as Mother of Learning imo. It's fully finished now and the first two books are stubbed with the rest on royal road. I never see it recommended so I'm spreading the word.

Chibrahim

oh, thx mate, I am always hungry for good stuff !